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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi 🌑 Darleen - QoD Author Icon ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

Happy early WDC Anniversary from "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window., Darleen!


Hiya there again! You have such an amazing poetry collection, Darleen! I had forgotten about the diversity and awesomeness of your poems, but now that I am here, I am quite enjoying my visit to your port *Bigsmile*.

The title of your poem was very impressive, I loved the way the 'Eternal Dance' sounded in my mind and when I closed my eyes, I imagined that the poem was going to be about fairies, a very nice snowy background and the nature's dance, beautiful and mesmerizing. Actually reminded me of a poem I had written myself. The cover photo for your work worked quite well with your poem, loved how you had used the transitioning image for the day into the night and the night into the day. Just like how I was fascinated with the use of heartbreak as a place, I loved how you had used the rotation of the day and night as a dance of nature. It was very perfect!

Free Verse poem worked quite well for your poem and the flow of your poem was perfect, there was no interruption and the pace was just right, neither too fast nor too slow for the reader. It took the reader with it, conveying beautiful and vivid images to the reader. The vocabulary you had used was my favourite part of your poem, I loved the opening stanza and I have to say, that one is my favourite too, with the clever usage of the word 'pregnant.' Similarly, I enjoyed the use of 'darkened waters,' 'gives birth,' and 'hope renewed.'

Other than my favourite stanza, this was a line that really touched me: and hopes renewed/ The eternal dance /echoes and endures. The personification you had used in your poem beautified and enhanced your poem to a great extent and brought your poem to another level.


Thank you for sharing your work with us!

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