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Hi 🌑 Darleen - QoD Author Icon ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

Happy early WDC Anniversary from "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window., Darleen!


I thought I had read this poem before but turns out I didn't. Strange. I wanted to read more of your poems, especially the nature ones. Therefore, when I was going through the list of poems in your poetry folder in your portfolio, this caught my attention.

There are two main reasons why I chose to read and review this particular poem. The first reason is that I absolutely love reading nature poems, especially about sunsets, sunrise and the scenery presented to the reader under the moon. The second reason why I chose this was the short description and the very beautiful cover photo of your poem that appealed to me and made me intrigued to know what kind of a poem it might be and here I am.

The idea of having "Blue Moon" as an acrostic poem was beautiful. It's a short poem but full of vivid images and beautiful vocabulary. The poem has a mysterious ring to it which seems very interesting to the reader. The starting line of your poem is good, it grabs the reader's attention immediately as she wants to know more about how much time the poet had spent under the moon and how often she does that as well as to know what kind of the secrets the moon hides. The flow of your poem was very good, there was no interruption and it flew smoothly when I read it out loud. The vocabulary you had used in your poem was strong, it helped the reader build quite a realistic image in her mind as she looked out at the blue moon that lighted dimly everything under, giving each object a new look, a new beauty, a new perspective. Wonderful!

My favourite lines were the following:

luminosity hides her darkness in plain sight, for
underneath the glow we find nothing but illusion;


Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Write On!
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