Hello sasharaven

I found you listed on the Angel Review Forum

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Title

Short, sweet, and to the point. I was drawn in by the title, "Farewell". The title does give a perspective of someone leaving. And it lives up to my expectations within the poem.



The rhythm moves at a quick pace. I feel using a line break and make this piece into two maybe Three stanza's would help the flow of the poem. Most of the lines flow together, but I feel maybe a couple are forced so the poem will rhyme. Good job at using punctuation. It helps with the flow.



There is sadness, a broken heart. I feel the love not returned and so they part ways with one still in love but letting go so the other can be happy.


I enjoyed reading Farewell. Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann




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