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Hello there, rl_gallear
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Lightning2*


*TeaP* I am also reviewing your item because it popped-up on the Random Review generator.

*Monkey* This was simply a fun read with many images floating about that found their way into my head. It was quick and quirky and quite rhythmic as well.

*Duck* I liked the visualizations of the courtiers and the Queen, and all she expected from them as her personal entertainment. Her remarks about each were amusing, and rhymed well.

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*ScallopY* I see the refrain line "The Queen of Quite Contrary" used for the start of each stanza. However, the word "quite was repeated in other lines within the first and second verse, but not the third, independent of the refrain line. I was just wondering if you meant to be repetitive with it, and if so, why not use it again in the third stanza if indeed it was used as an emphasis?

*Vignette7* Just wondered, about that. However, I did enjoy this read, it was smooth, colorful for the mind's eye and it made me smile. It has a feel of majesty as well as a twist of jester-fun. Singing, dancing, talking -- they all make their way into the court for her majesties amusement.

Good job! *TagY*

Until next time--write on!

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WebWitch *Witch*





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