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 Review #4328233 |
 Welcome to WDC! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you as this poem popped up on the Read and Review tab!   I enjoy cinquains and so this was appealing to read. The title is evocative and an intriguing title for a cinquain theme. Good hook!The creative imagery here is amazing and precise to illustrate Spite!  Your form is well composed with the correct syllables except in line 4. I think you have 9 instead of 8 count. Just drop the vague word "ought" to keep it direct and that will solve the issue. I think cinquains can look even more appealing if centered on the page--not necessary but try it for fun. Use {center} just before the first word as see.   Thanks for the thoughtful little note about cinquains too. It really can help a reviewer who may not know the form.   Impressive concept and image! I loved pondering on it. Well done! Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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