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 Review #4327593 |
 | Survivor  [E] About beating skin cancer.  |
| (5.0)  I am also reviewing your item, because it popped-up on the Random Review generator. Cancer is tough road to travel. Even as a person who has not traveled it personally, as of yet, I have watched a few loved ones go through the terrible struggle of living life the best way possible with this disease, and sometimes winning, and other times losing the battle. I am happy to read that you have cancer beat -- at least it is not active at this time in your life. I pray that it remains far away from anymore activity and you remain well. Your poem was well-rhymed and kept a fine rhythm, albeit about a deadly illness. You did a good job painting a huge picture in a concise way. I am not a fan of many rhyming poetic offerings, because many slip into a rhyme for the sake of rhyming, and it seems forced. I don't see how anyone who has fought the battle of cancer and has beat it, could write a poem that would seem appear as a common greeting card rhyme -- no, not at all. This one grips the reader and holds on to her right through to the end. That's not an easy thing to do with me, by the way!Well done!  Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 05/27/2017 @ 3:33am EDT