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*Balloonp* Hiya Chaoticharmony! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


This is absolutely delightful and fun to read! It has a child like charm and would be appealing to children. The short lines and simple language work well to create a quick paced and light hearted vibe! Using the personal I makes it experiencial and present tense brings me into the moment. *Thumbsup*

*Fairy* The free style suits the playful feel and the rhyme and soundscape of the words create a lovely flow. I think "its dark" needs to be "it's dark"! *Wink*

*Star*Thanks for sharing your creative vision.

Light on the path as you write on!
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