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 Review #4326349 |
 | Veron  [E] Essay Contest winner, prompt: What book character do you admire most and why?  |
| (5.0)  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Greetings, Ismaeduval! This is a really great piece of writing, and even if it is an essay, and I can see why it won that contest! I love the way you analogize (or confess, for lack of a better word) your own perfection to that of Veron's, and the way you did it was very professional. When we look at ourselves as compared to what others have done and gone through in their lifetimes, we seem to be pretty small potatoes! You don't mention how old you are, but it's obvious you have some writing experience and have been writing for some time. Bravo! Very well done! If you want any suggestions, I can only give you one: Kee ponw ritin gon, PLEASE!!! And welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite authors/books, location, etc.) but that's up to you, of course.
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