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SWEET ABYSS (FULL) Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Dorsidhion Mephistopheles!

I'm here to review your poem {item: as an official judge for "Newbies ONLY Short Story & Poem Contest" Open in new Window.. Thank you for entering!

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What I liked

Wow, this is dark. In a kinds sideways way it reminds me of Stephen King's The Dark Man. It really touches on the mind of somebody trapped within a dark cycle of some kind.

https://mollyellenpearson.wordpress.com/2014/10/29/poem-29-the-dark-man-stephen-...

What might need work

Personally, I prefer to see a bit more of a hint about what a poem is really about, but this was a great example of a poem that touches on emotions without clarity, and with mystery.

Conclusion — a summary of how this reader personally felt about your poem.

This is really good, dark poetry, imho.

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