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Rated: E | (3.0)
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The feelings in the poem are expressed truthfully but the choice of words is not great. The simplicity of the thought process is the good way to express real feelings instead of going around the words to complicate the matter which makes it cumbersome to read or understand. There is no rhythm or rhyme noted but it reads simply. no birthday decorations are mentioned neither the gifts, so it must be totally totally personal or small scale party limited to a close family and friends., who have strong feelings for a birthday person.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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