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The poem about the ruins is speaking about the evolution here.The poem is not very clear to me but the life 's events are narrated here but the drastic change in the lifestyles of the people around there is a mystery not well explained.The last stanza is totally confusing to me. till then the story was smooth, but took the mysterious turn and not so simple poem becomes a big mystery to the reader, which can't be solved since there is no common thread found in thinking and writing. The memory lane seems to be broken somehow.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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