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 Feels like we're dying Open in new Window. [E]
Just writing a feeling
by Makki Takanashi Author Icon
Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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a fiction about the daily life of a factory worker who doesn't know the life any different or better, they are stuck in routine probably all will die due to the polluted air created by the factory they worked in. but now they never realize the danger but just joke about it and passed the routine without a complaint, since they really are not aware of any thing to complain about , but together they lead the life of the factory worker and joke about their life and death don't get harried by living conditions or the lifestyle.
a simplicity of life is narrated well,
Jaya H.


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