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 Lawn duty Open in new Window. [E]
Poem describing powerful scents
by chas98 Author Icon
Review of Lawn duty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Based on a television series on BBC/Netflix



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's CrampOpen in new Window.. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought that you did a fine job with evoking memories of lawn duty over the years. I was reminded of my own Dad and how long and tirelessly he worked on his own lawn and my mother's flowers. It was truly a labor of love with him.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"The vague whiff of a thunderstorm seemed almost menacing
But the fragrance of my childhood ran by like a rushing stream."

That is very eloquent and reminds me of the memories that flow back at times. Well done. You have definitely written with the spirit of Sophie's prompt in mind.

Way to go!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read and the judge for today in "The Writer's CrampOpen in new Window.. I look at a review as my personal and unique reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.

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Either way, I enjoyed my visit with you immensely.

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