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 What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?  I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp"  . Thanks for entering!What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?   A house holds the memories of a past that brings heartache and longing to a man who once lived there. A visit to the family home is a sensory visit to things perhaps better left to themselves.What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?  I especially like how you tell the history of the house. This particular family is but one chapter in a line of families. Well, time goes on doesn't it? The music and the aroma were reminiscent to Jeremiah in a way that remains a mystery to the reader.I like that you leave it for the reader to decide for themselves what might have transpired. I felt for the caring spouse who felt enough to follow. That is a thankless role, to be sure. Fine work with the prompt - very original! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps  Ruminating Random Thoughts I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read and the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . I look at a review as my personal and unique reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.This site is open to all sorts of writers and reviewers. I like to keep an open mind about reading and reviewing. My own personal preference for reviews is that they be concise and more about the writing than the knowledge (or lack thereof) of the reader. My goal is to encourage you to continue your writing adventures. You are the ultimate judge as to whether I have been successful in that endeavor. Either way, I enjoyed my visit with you immensely.  Rumination Termination Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"
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