Hi AnaStar

I'm glad I read this work of yours. It is my pleasure to both read and comment on your work "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" .

First Impression/Thoughts:
This is a neat little poem about someone finding love again after having one's heart broken.

Creativity/Impact:
The extended metaphor of the broken heart is well-used here to express not only the heartbreak, but also the recovery and discovery of new love.

Message/Theme:
Love makes everything whole, even a broken heart.

Technique/Technical Notes:
These are just my thoughts and observations. I may not have read the work the way you intended. Please decide for yourself if these comments are helpful to you; if not, feel free to disregard them.

Title - The title is the first thing that prospective readers will see. Your title 'My Heart' informs the reader that this will be a poem about emotions. It is well chosen.

Grammar/Wording - I noticed nothing that jarred or confounded the reading. This is always a sign of good writing.

Form/Flow - The use of rhyming couplets and full rhymes injects a good tempo and energy into the reading.

Emotion/Imagery - Some neat little touches such as love oozing out of the creases. My favorite though is the less flashy but more moving for me You smiled and hugged me, // And never judged me.

Overall Rating/Final Thoughts: A simple and positive poem that makes for an uplifting read.

Thank you for a wonderful read!


Keep writing! Wishing you all the best,

Azrael

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