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No Net Open in new Window. [E]
280 words - Flash Fiction - Fantasy
by Hitchhiker Author Icon
Review of No Net  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Facebook* Yes, the old Facebook, take this test or that test request. They are usually forwarded by a person who claims to be in the top percentile of whatever the test is. Who wants to follow that act?!!! *Laugh*


*Toy* This story was amusing and brought some humorous imagery, if not painful pictures to this reader's mind's eye. Ten feet up and into the drywall -- not a pretty picture, and not easy to reverse the action. *Shock2*


Observations

"and more (or) less the same size and shape as my feet."

" So, I picked flying.
And now I can. It’s not as much fun as one would think. Do you remember the old TV series, “Greatest American Hero”"
You have an spacing issue in the formatting after the line ending in "flying."

*Monkey* Fine fantasy story that made me chuckle. I also found it educational because I learned a new way to "fly." A witch can't be too careful whenever air currents are concerned. *Witch**Wind*


Well done! *CoffeeT*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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