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A variation of Chain Verse
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Fhionnuisce
This is a Simply Positive Review! *PoseyV*


*Web3* I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the Random Review click.

*PenG* I really enjoyed this particular style of poetry. There is a repeat of the last word of each line, which begins the next line. I find that quite melodious in its flow.

*EggR* It is also a great way to supply emphasis to catch the reader's attention. I see that in the brief description, you call it a variation of Chain Verse. I am not studied in the various types of form poetry, thus I will have to look-up the non-variation of a Chain Verse. I lean mostly toward free verse when I do write poetry. However, I enjoy a rhyming verse when it is more than the common rhyming that can become monotonous if the rhyme words aren't carefully chosen. Too many times, rhymes sound forced.

The good news?

*Fox* Yours didn't sound forced at all. Perhaps because it was a mix of free verse in the first stanza and then into a rhyme form of every other line having its rhyme partner.

*Sneaker3* Thus, my question is -- do the usual Chain Verse forms have a first stanza of non-rhyme? I guess this is the only thing that stood out differently in the poem that made me pause when I returned to read it a second time. You did say it was a variation, though. *Wink*

*Vignette6* Again, I'm no huge fan of rhyme. I did like your poem for the free style of its presentation, yet the return of the end word in the beginning of the next line gave it a grandeur that made me take notice.

Well done! *DragonflyR*

Until next time--write on!

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WebWitch *Witch*


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