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 Romance wasn't Dead, But It Might Be Now Open in new Window. [18+]
A romantic dinner that wasn't going to happen. You have to read on to find out why.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window.*CakeP*


What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window.. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* A police woman comes home to find she has a thoughtful intruder, as per the prompt. This intruder, a former love, has a little too much in the way of thoughtful remembering in store for the main protagonist, Marci.

I absolutely love the title, which hooks me in as a reader. People sometimes lose site of how important a title and item description are. The line is crossed from thoughtful to weirdly scary, once the reading commences.

I think it is about stalking by over playing one's romantic hand. That is a very interesting thing to explore. I had a friend try to tell me what to put in my portfolio here in a way that told me she was watching every move I made. So, a friend turned into a weirdly controlling stalker there in the blink of an eye. This reminded me of that recent unfortunate happening.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I like that Marci is armed, yet holding it in. She is very controlled under the circumstances. After all is said and done this is a battle for control in Marci's own environment. No one can force her to celebrate an anniversary unless she allows it to happen. But, the question is and open question as to how far will she go to stop it. At the end, you leave it open for the reader to imagine, which is always a good way to go.

Nicely told.

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read and the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" Open in new Window.. I look at a review as my personal and unique reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.

This site is open to all sorts of writers and reviewers. I like to keep an open mind about reading and reviewing. My own personal preference for reviews is that they be concise and more about the writing than the knowledge (or lack thereof) of the reader.

I like to read reviews that lead me to read the writing that is being reviewed. To me, that is the ultimate goal to promote the work of fine authors here, like yourself.

My goal is to encourage you to continue your writing adventures. You are the ultimate judge as to whether I have been successful in that endeavor.

Either way, I enjoyed my visit with you immensely.

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