Hi Samberine Everose

I'm glad I read this work of yours. It is my pleasure to both read and comment on your work "LINES"  on behalf of "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" .

First Impression/Thoughts:
The striking form of the poem immediately drew my attention. I thought it looked like an anchor, or maybe even a face. Whatever it's supposed to be, I had fun just trying to make something of it.

Creativity/Impact:
I love how you arranged the lines to create such a powerful visual impact.

Message/Theme:
This poem is about a writer up late at night questioning the craft and act of writing. Wondering why to continue writing, but still continuing.

Technique/Technical Notes:
These are just my thoughts and observations. I may not have read the work the way you intended. Please decide for yourself if these comments are helpful to you; if not, feel free to disregard them.

Title - The title is the first thing that prospective readers will see. The title of LINES in boldface fits the poem perfectly.

Grammar/Wording - I noticed nothing that jarred or confounded the reading. This is always a sign of good writing.

Form/Flow - This is a unique and really outstanding form you've created for your poem. It's no wonder it was chosen for the anthology!

Emotion/Imagery - The use of alliteration in nostalgic nocturne creates quite a standout phrase. So does the personification of the dancing pencil.

Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:
This poem reminded me of how much a visual form poetry is - an element I often forget to utilize. Thank you for a wonderful read!


Keep writing! Wishing you all the best,

Azrael

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .