Hi River

I'm glad I read this work of yours. It is my pleasure to both read and comment on your work "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" .

First Impression/Thoughts:
Who doesn't hate snow? This is a neat little poem about having to shovel snow, which is the only worse than having to trudge through it.

Creativity/Impact:
You managed to capture your frustration and experience in a short 16 lines, maintaining a rhyme scheme and rhythm too! Nice!

Message/Theme:
Snow makes us mad, well, unless you're a snowboarder. Then it's a different kind of mad.

Technique/Technical Notes:
These are just my thoughts and observations. I may not have read the work the way you intended. Please decide for yourself if these comments are helpful to you; if not, feel free to disregard them.

Title - The title is the first thing that prospective readers will see. The title gives us a clue about the persona's feelings, but not the subject of the poem. It's great for a personal poem. For the average reader, a little more in the title will help stoke curiosity.

Grammar/Wording - I noticed nothing that jarred or confounded the reading. This is always a sign of good writing.

Form/Flow - The rhyme is maintained well, and the meter is mostly okay. It would be better if there is a little more consistency to the number of feet in each line.

Emotion/Imagery - I loved the metaphor My kitchen was a skating rink!

Overall Rating/Final Thoughts:
You're not alone in hating snow! Sharing your frustration through poetry was great. Thank you for a wonderful read!


Keep writing! Wishing you all the best,

Azrael

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