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Bare Hand Open in new Window. [E]
Melissa get's an art lesson.
by Winnie Kay Author Icon
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Review by jaya h Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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A strange experience in art exhibit is documented well. A girl so young can't appreciate the artist's whim but just got scared.The flash fiction is plotted well but the end is not as expected. It neither a surprise nor a moral of the story.It may be because the age of the girl couldn't get any deeper meaning of the experience spoken. a dialogue between them is interesting but doesn't add to the fiction ,I believe.I could be wrong there, but that 's what I understood.
An interesting fiction,
Jaya H.


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