A good poem, a form-the Trijan Refrain, read the very first time. and impressed by its contents. A theme is good and it flows smoothly. a life's struggle is painted well. the lines most liked are:
its song a soulful tune.
It recalls a lifetime’s symphony
among the boulders strewn.
I’m swept along within the song
with certainty that I belong.
after the storm . a calmness is acquired and wekll documented here
A good read,
Jaya H.