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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Christine Cassello Author IconMail Icon, I'm really glad I found this. Here's what I *Heart* about "Invalid Item" Open in new Window. -

1) The (almost) perfect rhyme and meter. Except for 'come' and 'sun', everything else rhymes perfectly. And you also managed to use tetrameter almost entirely, with mostly iambic feet. It's no mean feat!*CheckB*

2) Vivid imagery. I could see everything that happened in your dream so clearly!*CheckB*


Here's what would get this a higher rating from me:
I'm no poet laureate nor an expert, so this is just my personal response and opinion. But if you could achieve perfect rhyme and meter, that would be a 5-star feat for me.


Thanks for a great read!

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