General Comments & Reader Reaction: This was nonsensical, but one character was a cool as a cucumber, denying anything the other was throwing their way as the other read off the Valentine's candy hearts to make his case.

Characters: One main unnamed character who clearly wasn't happy in his/her relationship.

Emotion, Mood & Atmosphere: The emotion bordered on dislike, she wouldn't be talked into getting together again.

The mood is contemplative- reflecting on an issue of 'I will not' get back together with you.

The atmosphere- a one-sided conversation of 'no way,' and the other side 'Will you be mine.'

Setting & Imagery: The setting wasn't mentioned, this was strictly dialog.

The imagery is easy to picture, one person with an angry, red face, and the other a sweet-talker.

Plot & Pace: The plot is dialog for a Valentine's Day contest.

The pace is a back and forth discussion.

Themes: People will let you down

Structure & Consistency: I find the structure to be well thought out to make into a nonsensical conversation.

It stayed consistent throughout.

Favorite Lines:

“No way! Go! Get out of my life!”
“Sweet heart, me and you.”

Overall Impression & Conclusion: Yes, it was a bunch of nonsense, but it was cute to read, and it made me smile. Good Job!



Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Jeannie🌺


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .