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Homeless in the streets
by T.L.Finch Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, T.L.Finch
This is a Simply Positive review! *MedalGold*


*FishP* I am reviewing this item because it popped-up on the random review click.

*MushroomG* Your poem is crafted beautifully, yet within such beauty of words, lays the bleakness of homelessness.

*BareTree2* Such a harsh life to live, as weather, and sanitary conditions can run amok for the homeless person. Food, clothing, reasonable shelter a few far between. One must live of his own wits and street-wise training in order to escape unscathed. It is a dangerous way to live, indeed.


Observation:

"Dark Knights and street fights, wish you're never born."
[You're = you are.(present tense] To be grammatically correct, it should be "wishing you were never born."

*BareTree* You take this serious subject matter and put a face on it. We see the world through the eyes of this homeless person, who is losing strength and faith that his life would ever turn around for the better. He is tired and feels he has reached the end of his road.

*Hourglass* It is sad, yet it is true for some people, just trying to survive life, day to day on the streets.


Well done! *AwarenessW*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*



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