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This is a nice story about love, longing and dragons. The test has a lot of grammar and English problems and should be rechecked for the same. Gabriel's attraction for Isabella is brought out well and adds taste to the story. The situation is explained delicately and makes the reader remember the characters. Miriyan's entry takes the reader by surprise and adds a new twist to the story. The description's of Miriyan's family and home is also amusing. The final dream makes the longing felt by the two very real.

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