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| (5.0)  Happy New year Mari! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!   The title and theme of this appealed to me when it popped up on random reads. So many things inspire creativity and I was curious to see your vision. It was fun to visualize the vivid bits and creations jumbled down the page. I thought of the magic of found objects and plastics as well that could be added to the fun with playdoh. I enjoyed the description in the first verse and how you name it at the end. "inexpensive" is true too as you can make your own.   Each free style verse has a picture of what you do to create a different item. The vocabulary was well chosen and the present tense is effective to involve us in the present moment.  The short lines between each verse are effective in summing up what was made (past tense) before moving on to a new endeavour.  I wondered if there was a more sensate word for "unique" to describe the smell.It was fun to play in the childlike energy of your vision.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 01/07/2017 @ 2:27pm EST