"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  10th Anniversary Year

Member-to-Member Honour Review

Hi Sum1!

I am the Wordy Jay and I'm here to celebrate YOU -- my fellow Power Reviewer -- with a review! (What else?!)


This was such a delightful read! Nice twist at the end too -- didn't expect the mirror or the "accidental murder"! I normally don't have a penchant for melodrama but I'll gladly make an exception for this piece!

My favourite entry was the one on November 24th. I really couldn't decide which was funnier: the horror at witnessing the Magnusons in the nude or the cramps both of them had!! Thanks for the giggles!!


Just some thoughts:


Personally, I think that the transition between the Magnusons and the Campbells would be smoother if you said that the Magnusons moved away, instead of saying that the mirror moved on to the Campbells.


The reason for the fight between the Campbells wasn't very believable, perhaps, due to the pace. It doesn't seem quite credible for a couple who's so very in love to end up in such a mess within less than a year (unless one of them is a drug addict!).


Well, that's just my 2 cents' worth! Feel free to do whatever you wish with my suggestions -- whether it is to adopt them, discard them, or anything in between!

A review courtesy of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 





My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .