This is a review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

Remember I am not a professional reviewer. These are just my personal impressions and thoughts. My goal is to be encouraging and give you something that will actually help your writing.

First Impressions:

One of the neighbours, when I was growing up, nicknamed me dreamer. I liked this story a lot especially the humorous twist at the end. I never got that exact speech from my parents growing up but did get a lot of very similar ones. I thought it was believably written.

My Favorite Elements:

The fact that in the end the daydreaming actually paid off for our protagonist.

Suggestions:

I thought the title was okay but I honestly think that could be improved upon. There could be a little polishing here and there as well.

Overall:

Great story. I liked it. You might consider highlighting the contest prompt words by putting them in bold. It does help the judges. Good luck in the contest.

Keep on writing!

Pico

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