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I am not a poet and have only rudimentary knowledge on the subject. I do think that poetry should have a general appeal that goes beyond lovers of poetry. For that reason I'm giving my opinion. It is just an opinion but I hope you find it helpful.

Overall Impression:

I like the little bit of tongue in cheek humour here. I thought it was good but didn't make me stand up and say wow that's awesome.

Structure:

This is my second poetry lesson of the day. For a lot of poets tetrameter is likely obvious. For me I'm glad you labeled what you are doing structurally. For an attempt, I think you completely succeeded. I carefully went through each line to make sure you had it right.

Imagery:

I think it was appropriate to the poem. Too much "depth" would have lost me anyway.

Suggestions:

I think you succeeded in writing a humorous lighthearted poem. I would be happy with it the way it is.

Final Words:

I don't generally write poetry but it is valuable to my prose. Rhythm, rhyme and imagery can be really effective when writing a story. I learn when reading and reviewing poets on WDC here. Thank you. I appreciate the lesson.

Keep on writing!

Pico

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