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Remember I am not a professional reviewer. These are just my personal impressions and thoughts. My goal is to be encouraging and give you something that will actually help your writing.

First Impressions:

Can this really be defined as an essay? I wouldn't have called it that. On the other hand, I know the system here requires you to call it something. I would have just listed it as an opinion but that option isn't on the list. I found your opinion clearly stated, logical and concise. I have no argument with the content. The best way to avoid unwanted pregnancy is to prevent them from happening in the first place.

My Favorite Elements:

I like the directness and the clarity.

Suggestions:

If you want to turn this into a real essay, I would suggest expanding on the subject. Maybe add examples.

Overall:

There is nothing wrong with the way you write or the style of your writing. Good work. Maybe we should ask the site to add opinion as a primary category. I certainly would have given it a higher score if that were the case.

Keep on writing!

Pico

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