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 On Death Open in new Window. [E]
A piece on death.
by sleeky_basileus Author Icon
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Review by Angus Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Bon jour, Sleeky Basileus!
This is different, and it's certainly a 'thinking' piece. But in some strange way you've actually made death seem more peaceful and not so scary with this. Yes, it's something everybody will have to eventually do, and Lord knows that 99.9% of people are scared (to death *Laugh*) of it, but I think that last line somehow says it all.
I don't know who this Wichegbule or Ikechi are, so maybe you could email me back and let me know. But I did like that part about how 'we've always been in the very beginning and the end'.
Very true.
BTW, you might want reset that 'justify' at the end. It didn't come out right.
Kee ponw ritin gon, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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