| Personal Note: I came to visit you this fine Thursday evening it is} evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: Alone Amongst Others My Greeting: Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two! My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful. My Thoughts: I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in... I was into your poem by the first line, your web of words just captived me. I found a very creative, unique and full of emotion. What a lovely poem indeed. My Favorite Parts: I can honestly say that I love your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and there is no way that I could pick just one line as your poem really does fit completely together. Great job. My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job! My Suggestions: Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what. My Rating: I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating. This review is coming to you from; "The WDC Angel Army" ![]() sunnystarr
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