| Personal Note: I came to visit you this fine Thursday evening it is} evening. You really have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: The Black Ghost. My Greeting: Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more and likely be back another time or two! My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting and helpful. My Thoughts: I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in... A well thought out, clever, unique, a one of a kind for sure poem and most creative. My Favorite Parts: Your message carries nothing but sorrow. This line really just stood out to me, although I did enjoye your whole poem too. My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job! My Suggestions: Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what. My Rating: I am giving a rating on your very creative poem with a "five-star" rating. This review is coming to you from; "The WDC Angel Army" ![]() sunnystarr
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