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Playing with slang words!
by Maxamilium Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings Maxamilium!
I really have only one word for this: huh?
I knew you were going to using ‘slang’ words in this, and I do know a few, but I don’t know 1/10 of these. Truth be told, I’m not even sure if I should be reviewing this because I’m not sure what it was even about (I'm not sure if there were any mistakes in it!). So that will be my review: trying to guess what this is about.
As I see it, a beach bum wakes up with a major hangover and almost stumbles over his dog. He’s hungry so he goes to his favorite store, but on the way he ends up lying on a beach on a bright sunny day.
Then his friend shows up and won’t shut up, and the guy on the beach gets sick on the dude’s shoes. The dude runs away and meets a girl who he invites to a bar, but the girl doesn’t want to go.
Unfortunately, that’s about where I lost it.
But if you were going for shock value about the demise of communication between generations in this day and age, then you hit the nail on the head with this, Maxamilium!
Therefore, I’m going to award it 4.5 stars, but not because I understood it, but because you stuck to your guns about what you were going to write about.
Is that groovy, Bro? Are you down with that?
Keep on chillin’, my man, and keep your shadow behind your back!


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