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crime scene Open in new Window. [E]
Try and solve this mystery without reading ahead.
by ginothecat Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Howdy, Ginothecat!
Hmm. Well, I guess I'm not going to have a job as a detective!
Seriously though, for your 1st piece on here and having it as a mystery is rather unique, and it's pretty good, too. Can't say that I've come across too many mystery writer Newbies on here, English or otherwise.
Great spelling and grammar, but I think you maybe should have added a least a few more clues to this. But that's just my opinion, although it would be cool if you would let me know if ANYBODY figures this out!
I did like that part about NO37.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Ginothecat (here, kitty kitty *Smirk*), and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! And don't worry if you're good or not-the more you write, the better you'll become-trust me on this!
PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you, but that's up to you, of course.


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