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Greetings, Phil G!
I've reviewed your pieces before, so I'm not surprised at how good they are. And this one is no exception!
This is really good. I like how tell 'down-home' country stories, and I'd be willing to bet that this is a true story, or at least loosely based on one/c}
Your descriptions were great, and it's no wonder you have your own weekly column in The Bourbon County Citizen!
Well done.
Hope you don't mind, but I did see a few niggles you might want to check. And a comment!
'June Bug(')s part of this mission...'
'...contemplating our miserable luck when I notice(d) a house...'
Thirty years old is 'elderly'? (Thanks a lot! *Laugh* Yeah, I know you have a couple of years on me, but not many!)
'...our neighbor(')s back yards...'
Thanks for the chuckles, Phil. Once again, it was a pleasure to read, and it's very deserving of that 1st place ribbon! Congratulations on that!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC (again!)
PS-You now have your 2nd fan!

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