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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Konnichiwa, Wolfwalker, and happy (belated) 11th 'birthday' on here!
I'm not a big romance lover, but I do see some potential for comedy in this, so I implore you to continue it (I noticed that you do have one more chapter, {item:1289649)). This idea of internet dating is crazy enough in real life, so you've got something here that's rather unique, which isn't easy to do in this day and age!
So far, so good!
BUT...it's been almost 10 years since you worked on this! What gives? Would you like a complimentary kick in the rear? Just kidding. But you really should get back to this. I know I'm being a little hypocritical here (I have a few myself waiting to be finished, which is why I try to stick to short stories), but that's no excuse for either of us!
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'chug beer, mud-wrestle, and out-cuss a pirate's parrot.' (actually that's the kind of gal I'm looking for! *Laugh*)
Great spelling and telling, and good luck on writing this backwards in order to bring it up to date!
Kee ponw ritin gon, and may you have many more wonderful 'birthdays' on WdC!


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