What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

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What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

A an intrepid boy brings home a rock gargoyle for a pet. We read on to discover that who is really whose pet is not that clear in the end. Methinks the rock gargoyle is in charge.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I like how the point of view shifts at the end, after the rock gargoyle does its thing to make the mother respect it. The shift in point of view is chilling as the reader realizes who is really in control.

I like that twist at the end - very clever and I enjoyed your story very much and also that the boy called the rock gargoyle, "thing". !



THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

SometHiNg

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

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