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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost* You visited me recently with a nice review, so here I am visiting you and perusing your Poetry Folder. I have been fascinated with birds lately and reading about their behaviors.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* You write about migratory birds who set off for the unknown every year. They never know what the future will hold, still they carry on just as people are supposed to do. Sometimes though, we lack their courage and fortitude.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part as it made me feel a great deal of sympathy for them and what they endure on whatever level they experience it all:

"Through the rain storm; guided by a star
Bending their heads; faith upon the air"

With faith, we all carry on in our own way, don't we?

Lovely poetry - very eloquent!

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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Pumpkin*SometHiNg*Witchhat*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you and reading about the noble birds who travel above us! I wish they would give me some of their courage for whatever it is I will face in the years ahead!

*Leaf*END OF SometHiNg*Leaf*



Ta Ta until we meet again....

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