What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

You visited me with a nice review recently, so here I am visiting you and reading in your portfolio. I decided to peruse one of your poetry folders. The title and description here caught my attention.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

You have captured some of the conflicting emotions when we lose someone we hold dear. Maybe no relationship is free from hate and upset. I know I have lost people suddenly and it is a blessing when some things have been resolved. I don't know how painful that would be if there was stuff hanging. I hope I never know that.

Still, there is the love that makes you want the best and maybe that propels towards some kind of forgiveness along the way.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"You were taken from us with morning light,
dead before the sunrise, you didn't fight.
I am happy for you now to suffer no more,
I wish I told you that I loved you before."

I often find myself wishing I'd said things that I never got around to saying. But then I don't know if that sort of thing ever really changes the way we feel about a loss. It is hard to say whether it has an impact or not.




THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

SometHiNg

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I don't get into the poetry weeds much in the analyzing department, but I do look for original phrasing and something that reaches out to me the way your poem did. I enjoyed visiting with you!

END OF SometHiNg

Above was not a disclaimer as it is modified to each item I read (unless I forget)


Ta Ta until we meet again....

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