What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

You visited me recenty with some nice reviews, so here I am dropping in to read and send you my own review. I love the title of this as it immediately brought to mind memories of my childhood home, especially.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

You take the reader back in time to younger days. We all bring our whatevers to the reading. Mine is more about being little and wanting to go home to that hot chocolate you speak of.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This is all lovely and eloquent. This was my favorite passage:

"No blooms of life, no rose leaves
Found in winter's dormancy.
Vivid splashes of color
Slept under winter's blanket
The molten grey sky hovered
Over our special place."

This brings me back to a picture of a time that seemed to be so slow when I lived it and now it whooshes past in memory. You have brilliantly captured the sights and feeling of the time and brought it back to me in a way that doesn't make me sad. That is remarkable because going back like that usually results in great sadness. Today, it just makes me smile and want hot chocolate.

Well done!



THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

SometHiNg

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much, but when I do it's because I truly felt something. I enjoyed visiting with you!

END OF SometHiNg

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