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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Dream ~★~ Justly Author IconMail Icon !

I'm your local Sb here and I'm reviewing you on behalf of the Simply Positive group. I'm also reviewing as part of this Piratey event: "Invalid ItemOpen in new Window.. Let's get rolling!

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*NoteW* First impressions- I knew there was a blog on my review list still and I was racking my brains where did it go and how did I lose it? Then I came across your blog since I'm going after a Challenge or reading/reviewing the people within Cards Against Humanity who are past winners and... bam! I'm back here again, which is good because I dig your entries. I will be focusing on your most recent blog entry with this review.

*SuitDiamond* "Invalid EntryOpen in new Window. I love your response to the sorcerer prompt. I was basically like 'ditch the guy, that's not a very healthy relationship' in my response so it was fun to read yours as well. I mean he can turn you into whatever he wants? Good riddance to that noise, I like being what I want to be 24/7 so I'd totally dump the guy myself as well.

*Vignette3* Your second response to the second prompt is pretty much what I'd do. Except I would hyperventilate in a bag trying to get my head back into the game. I have an extreme fear of getting lost so... there's that to worry about. I can and have had panic attacks so my response was more like 'hyperventilate/shake/rock myself and suck my thumb for a bit, no required pattern for all that.'


*Heart*Things Which I Enjoyed
I feel like you tackled the two prompts well. Also, heads up, this entry right here: "Invalid EntryOpen in new Window. I had saved on my tabs during GoT to make sense of what was going on in the games. My main thing was to review a lot and don't stop until I pass out then I repeat the next day. But, I loved how you explained in detail what everything meant because I was especially confused about battling with an alley. I thought we needed to defeat the alley but instead, it's more of defeating the game which was the point. Collecting the most points, etc, going on. So, this was such an awesome entry on the makings of the game that I went back to it pretty consistently to make sense of things when I wasn't reviewing.

Overall Comments
Overall, I think that you need to get back to adding more blog entries. *wags fingers at you* I really enjoy your blog and you do a great job with it. I understand life getting in the way but don't lose this little space for your thoughts and all that. I hope this little review is helpful for you. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! =D

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