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 Ghosts in the Works Open in new Window. [18+]
Flash/500 words or less Pirates, Vikings with a ghost or sea monster
by E E Coder Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Title:
Ghosts In The Works Wonder why there are ghosts and in what works.
Description:
Flash/500 words or less Pirates, Vikings with a ghost or sea monster This should be interesting.
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What and why:
I know I wasn't thrilled with the language, however the story was a surprise. I enjoyed finding it was about making a film rather then just a story. The corpse laughing at the end was amusing.
plot:
Interesting plot with a story being made in film mingled with the story of an actor throwing a fit over the phone because of the Ghost and troubles while making the film.
Rhythm:
The story flowed nicely except for having to in my mind change some of the strong language.
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My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:
         
The story is fine the language I can change in my mind, so no ideas or suggestions come to mind.
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My thoughts and Impressions:
I enjoyed the story in general, am glad to have been able to read and review. I gave this word a 4.o mostly for language.
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