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Hello, Simply Author Icon! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when this caught my attention and I wanted to see what kind of a story you had here. I like reading flash fictions because I am always fascinated by how people can write a perfect, complete story within such a small word count so to know what you had here, I had to read it.

The title of your work is very intriguing as it makes the reader wonder what kind of a point is the person reaching in the story and what will happen beyond that point. The story opens with two people with very unique and interesting names and I thought they'd be humans walking onto another planet but instead, the reader learns that they are two aliens from outer space who are learning more about humans and the barbarians we have turned ourselves into. I have often thought of how someone from outside might see what we are doing to each other and to them, we might seem nothing more than primitive race, similar to animals who are always violent, cruel, hurtful and animalistic. The flow of your story was very good, I must say I wasn't expecting the story to turn out the way it did but it was a good approach towards a hopeful ending reassuring the reader that there are still good people left on the planet who want to save and preserve the world as it is for the future generations. Definitely an interesting and unique read! Well done!

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