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Hello, Shaye Author Icon! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


While I was browsing something to read and review in your poetry folder, this caught my attention as I wanted to know more about the mysterious title you had for this poem. I really like reading poems and stories about inanimate objects which are given emotions, feelings and conscience. It removed the boundary and the writer can literally write anything about them which is what makes stories and poems like these very interesting, at least for me.

It intrigued the reader to know what kind of a poem you might have written on a coin. I must say that I didn't expect the poem to turn out the way it did but it was a good surprise for the reader. It's been quite some time since I last read a comedy poem so this was a good one, it made me laugh at the end. The poem you have here was very vivid and imaginative, loved the idea. The vocabulary you had chosen was good. As the reader progressed in your poem, she could literally feel the frustration of the coin and see things from it's point of view of how stupid we might look by throwing money into the well to get our wishes come true. The part I really loved and had me laughing was how he cursed the person who threw him and said that he hopes his wish never gets accepted or fulfilled. *Rolling*

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