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Hello, Shaye Author Icon! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


I was searching for something to review from your portfolio in your poetry folder when this caught my attention. I really like reading nature poems and in the nature, I really enjoy the night sky and the stars. It has a romantic, calm and relaxing touch to it as well as sometimes a bit of sadness especially when you use moon in the poem. Anyway, this is my personal point of view. The title of your poem was simple but enough to appeal to the reader and get her attention. It made me imagine being far away from the city lights and under the clear blue sky looking at the thousands and thousands of lights that keep flickering out in the distance. Just the title alone made me feel so calm and therefore I automatically wanted to know more about this poem of yours.

You have a beautiful poem here, Lorraine. Although it's short but the imagery it created, the images it painted in my mind were very vivid and realistic. The flow of your poem was good and there was no interruption. I liked the vocabulary you had used in your poem that covered a wide range of things about stars like personal feelings and then adding the scientific touch to it as most people wonder what kind of life and if life exists on those other stars and if someone else might be watching our planet just like we are doing theirs. My favourite lines from your poem were the "Endless Sparkling/Beautifying the night sky"

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