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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Dan Sturn

This poem works wonderfully as an analogy of the inner workings of the mind. I think the whole concept of mind as playground is wonderful. It also has a subtle humour to it. In that respect I especially love the ending part about Fame and Disgrace. Giving proper names to feelings and ideas by capitalising them(as with the aforementioned Fame and Disgrace) also reminds me of The Pilgrim's Progress which is no bad thing.

This poem was a pleasure to read and I very much enjoyed the experience.

Best wishes,
Mark


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