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Rated: E | (4.5)
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7/12/2016. Hello, Survivor48! I selected another of your poems to review. I will give you my honest opinion and hope you find this feedback useful.

I liked this rhyming poem. The descriptions of concern and doubt are apparent. I like the ending of the third stanza in which you give yourself a reminder of your promise, not to slap destiny.


Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

GaelicQueen
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