Greetings, Antonia Ryder!

My name is Lady Cubbyella and I am one of the sly foxes from the House of Florent.

Title: Wish for Forgiveness

First Impression: Oh, I love lyrics and I was very impressed with yours! I've written several songs myself in my younger years. My dad bought me a guitar when I was 13 years old and from then on I was hooked! I am curious if you have a tune in your head when you write your lyrics or if you only have the words in mind. Or perhaps both? Also, I'm wondering if there was an influence in your life to write lyrics or perhaps an experience that nudged you into it? I'm only asking because I'm curious to know.

What needs your attention: I can't really give you any suggestions, honestly. What I love about lyrics is that unlike traditional poetry, it's more the rhythm of the music--not the meter count of the syllables--that is important. I hope you figure out some music to go with it! Do you play an instrument?

What part I liked best: I love how you set everything up and organized it. It's easy to take in and looks professional! You were very consistent.

Overall impression: You are a talented writer and I wish the best for you in your future endeavors of writing lyrics!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my
pleasure.

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")

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